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Arsh Kaur | Poet's avatar

Woahh. I could feel the anxiety!! Great story Theo!

Theodora Sterling's avatar

Thanks so much Arsh!!

Dee | Wax & Wonder's avatar

This was so cool to read. It's like the writing style stretched out every second, until everything happened at an excruciating pace. You really captured the anxiety. Great work!

Theodora Sterling's avatar

Thank you so much!! I’ve been trying to experiment with how sentence structures and paragraphs can mess with pace. Happy that this one worked!!

Jeff's avatar

stellar stuff...

Theodora Sterling's avatar

Thanks so much :)