I felt his pain of being second and I knew whats coming! Classic Theo story ending. I love your villain characters. This also made me think about cat lady.
The tone of voice in this piece is so convincing! You really stepped into the character. And loooved the line "heavy like a dark crown on his perfect head." Great read!
This was so well written! I loved it. Quick, concise, and heart stopping. So good.
thank you so much!!
I felt his pain of being second and I knew whats coming! Classic Theo story ending. I love your villain characters. This also made me think about cat lady.
Thanks so much!! I’m happy you enjoyed this!
The tone of voice in this piece is so convincing! You really stepped into the character. And loooved the line "heavy like a dark crown on his perfect head." Great read!
ooooooh!!! Thanks so much! I’ve definitely been trying to practice my character voice, I’m so proud you noticed. Thank you! 😊
That went south really fast!😂 Great write! I really liked it!☺️👏
Thanks so much!! 😊